The several days, I can not sleep well and feel tired. Maybe I need to take a relax to promote to
me physical state. Moreover, I concede that my physical state not well, so I need take a relax. I
get used to taking the night life and sometims go to sleep at three o'clock. I will get rid of
changing myself life.
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Hi Adam. I wanted to point out that "relax" is a verb, so there is no such thing as "a relax." You could say "I need to relax to get back into shape." I see that you did not spell check this entry, as "sometims" is not a real word. What's with the strange breaks between "to" and "me," or "I and "get," etc.?
Let me rewrite this whole entry for you. Please consider my changes and see what was wrong with the original.
Here is my rewrite.
I have not slept well for several days, so I feel tired. Maybe I need to take some time off and get back into shape, since I admit that I'm not in such great physical shape these days. I've gotten used to night life recently; sometimes, I don't go to bed until 3:00 AM! I will stop changing my routine and get back to my original life.
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